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Wednesday, December 4, 2013

Steal Like an Artist

Today, I would like to introduce a concept that my AP English teacher likes to call “Stealing Like An Artist”.

In truth, when he talks about “stealing like an artist” he’s really reminding us to cite every single thing we ever add to an essay… ever. However, I’m stealing his phrase and using it for my own purposes, which coincidentally related to what I’m talking about.

I want to air out the dirty laundry right now. I am not talking about plagiarism.

Plagiarism is, in a simple phrase, no cool.

If there is anyone among my audience that hasn’t had their head bashed in hundreds upon hundreds of times by their English teachers about what plagiarism is and to never do it, plagiarism is when an creator, typically an author of some sort, uses someone else’s ideas or concepts or characters or what not and passes them off as their own.

It’d be like me writing a book about a girl named Beth and her best friend Marie who find out that they have magical powers and have to go to a school to learn how to control their powers where they attend classes every day and learn how to do magic and find out that they're destined to fight an evil wizard who's trying to take over the magical world.

The saddest part is that I actually did try to write that book in the 3rd grade. Marie could breathe under water. I don’t remember anything about Beth which is funny considering she was the character based off me.

Does this mean that you will never be able to write a book about a teenager discovering they have magical powers?

Of course not. It’s certainly hasn't stopped someone yet.

Does this mean you will never be able to write a book about said teenager going off to learn how to control their magical powers?

No, probably not.

Does this mean you will never be able to write a book about said teenager going off to a magical school to learn magic from a wise old man and perhaps fight off a Dark Lord?

… yeah. Unless you are severely clever and tactful, which would be extremely hard.

This being said, are there still authors who write very similar novels? Yes. Many people have accused Suzanne Collins of plagiarizing Koushun Takami’s Battle Royale for her novel Hunger Games. Both novels are about a dystopian world where teenagers are placed in an area of some sort with lots of weapons and told to kill each other until there’s only one survivor. She claims that she had never even heard of Battle Royale until after her book was published.

Is this true?

I think only Collins herself knows. A lot of people think that she’s lying. I’m personally inclined to believe her. There have been more than enough times in my life where I’ve come up with some idea or done some project that I think is completely original only to find out that someone else has come up with the same thing.

It happens. Especially in writing.

It’s one of the biggest problems that any creators face. Trying to create something new.

I’m not going to claim that everything’s been written, every genre created, every character flaw explored. I’m sure people thought that when some crazy English lady named Mary Shelly wrote about a scientist named Frankenstein that used electricity to create life, a monster named after himself, and the science fiction genre.

However I am going to venture to say, and I’m sure many Literature professors would agree with me, that there are only a handful of stories that have ever been told and will continue to be told as long as humans exist to tell or listen to them.

Some people will tell you that there are only two stories, some four, some thirty-six.

Explaining all of these is a post for another day though.

So, if every story has been written… what are we supposed to do?

That’s the fun part that ties in with stealing like an artist.

Literally almost any major plot device you can come up with has been used before, even if you don't know it. Whether by the Greeks, a French writer in the 18th century, Shakespeare, or in past ten years.

So basically no matter what you write you’re stealing from someone else.

The trick is doing it well enough that no one cares.

You can do this by mixing and matching plots and devices and character traits and such. That’s one of the best ways to create a character in my opinion; mixing and matching character traits until they become a real person. Take a plot device here, a plot twist there.

Then, perhaps most importantly, you put your own flair on it. Whatever it is that makes you different, your idea different, your novel different. That’s what really makes a story unique. That’s the part that you’re really selling to an agent, or an editor, or readers. That is the answer to their question, “why should I read your book and not one of the thousands of others?”



I will quote myself in this regard. “All the good plots have been taken. So be discrete when you steal.”

Tuesday, October 29, 2013

The Pros of Acting Things Out in Your Bathroom

Or your bedroom. Or any room of the house that you can act or shout things out loud without too much concern from your parents/the rest of your family.

This is one method that I will endorse to the ends of the earth. I’ve always had an interest in acting, personally. Not as in I want to go to Hollywood or star on Broadway, but more I really enjoy taking Drama classes at school and I was in the school play once. I played Theseus in A Midsummer’s Night Dream. Had a beard. It fell off during our finally performance. That was a tricky situation. I nearly had a heart attack on stage, but just kept on acting until the Rude Mechanicals entered and stole the spot light to fix it.

But my escapade on stage are not why you’re reading this.

I have always believed that acting is a great way to help improve your writing. More specifically scenes than your writing as a whole, but still very beneficial. To act well, you really have to put yourself into the character’s mind. You have to try to think like them and feel what they’re feeling, and that’s really the best way to be able to write them. There’s just something different about acting or speaking their roles to yourself though. It makes the more real than if you’re just thinking of dialogue in your head.

It’s also a great way to figure something out if you’re not sure how you want a particular scene to go. Sometimes when I’m writing a scene I’ll just go upstairs to my bedroom and start acting the scene out with myself. Or sometimes I’ll explain the situation to my little sister and she’ll help me come up with something for it. Sometimes it doesn’t work and I don’t use anything that I came up with while I was acting it out. Then again, sometimes I end up getting hit with the perfect line and I have to run downstairs and type it up as quickly as I can.

I usually do this in my bedroom before I go to bed, or while I’m taking a shower, or as I’m washing my hands. It’ll sometimes happen while I’m sitting at my computer, but I find it works slightly better if you’re up on you're in a different setting. I would also suggest going somewhere where’s it’s not going to disturb too many people (or convince too many of the witnesses that you’re crazy. I made the mistake of doing something like this in my AP English the other day… staring at a wall talking in a Russian accent… yeah…).

Now, you do not have to do it the way that I do. Margaret likes to pace in giant circles making faces with music playing loudly. I think silence and sitting still helps better. It’s one of those methods that works better if you’ve tailored it to your own preferences and see what helps you out the best.

And the best part is it often helps with Writers Block too!


Have you ever tried this before? How had it helped you in the past?

Saturday, October 19, 2013

Music Playlist

Now, let us not confuse this post with Music and Playlists. This is a different post, though it is almost directly related to it. After writing that post, I decided that it would be a really good idea to, instead of giving you guys vague ideas about what to listen to while write, to give you an actual example of what Margaret and I like to listen to. So I created a Youtube channel and created one!

Music Playlist by Amanda and Margaret Vinshire

As of right now, the playlist contains these songs:

Explosions in the Sky- Birth and Death of the Day
Davin Laz- Cristofori's Dream
Hanz Zimmer- Up is Down
Hurt- Silver Linging
Jon Mclaughlin- So Close
Jason Walker- Echo
Coldplay- Viva la Vida
Snow Patrol- Chasing Cars
Snow Patrol- Set Fire to the Third Bar
Nick Lachey- Whats Left Of Me
Monary- Travelling by Ambulance
30 Seconds to Mars- This is War
Vienna Teng- Anna Rose
Hanz Zimmer- Time
Linking Park- Castle of Glass
Typler Ward, Lindsey Stirling, Chester See- Daylight
David Lanz- Faces of the Forest
Ellie and Landon Austin- Safe and Sound
Rob Thomas- Little Wonders
Taylor Swift- Haunted
John Mayer- Dreaming With a Broken Heart
Mulan's Decision
Vienna Teng- Antebellum
Lindsey Stirling and Pentatonix- Radioactive
Regina Spektor- The Call
Withing Temptation- Memories
Withing Tempation- Angles
Narnia Battle Theme
John Powell- Forbidden Friendship
Piano Guys- Moonlight

They are NOT in any particular order. Quite frankly, they're just in the order that they're on my favorites list.

These are my favorite "Epic Scene" songs:
Explosions in the Sky- Birth and Death of the Day
Hanz Zimmer- Time
Mulan's Decision
Lindsey Stirling and Pentatonix- Radioactive
Narnia Battle Theme

Depression/Desperation/Hopelessness ect.:
Davin Laz- Cristofori's Dream
Jason Walker- Echo
Snow Patrol- Chasing Cars
Snow Patrol- Set Fire to the Third Bar
Nick Lachey- Whats Left Of Me
Monary- Travelling by Ambulance
Ellie and Landon Austin- Safe and Sound
John Mayer- Dreaming With a Broken Heart
Regina Spektor- The Call
Withing Temptation- Memories
Withing Tempation- Angles

Fluffy Songs:
Jon Mclaughlin- So Close
Vienna Teng- Anna Rose
Typler Ward, Lindsey Stirling, Chester See- Daylight

Hopeful:
Rob Thomas- Little Wonders
David Lanz- Faces of the Forest
John Powell- Forbidden Friendship

Multiple Genre:
Hanz Zimmer- Up is Down
Hurt- Silver Linging
30 Seconds to Mars- This is War
Linking Park- Castle of Glass
Vienna Teng- Antebellum
Piano Guys- Moonlight

Writing about Late 1700s/Early 1800s. particularly dictators of the French variety:
Coldplay- Viva la Vida

As of this point in time, most of the songs on here are Amanda's writing songs, mostly because Margaret has yet to get me a list of her favorite writing songs. Once she does, I'll be sure to update it. Unfortunately we haven't really gotten the chance to talk much recently. School makes people busy which makes other people sad.

Friday, October 11, 2013

True Names- Naming Your Characters

          "What do personal names mean in this language? Do they give power over people?"          "Yes, they do. Those who speak the language have two names. The first is for everyday use and had little authority. But the second is their true name and is shared without a few trusted people. There was a time when no one concealed his true name, but this age isn't as kind. Whoever knows your true name gains enormous power over you. It's like putting your life into another person's hands. Everyone had a hidden name, but few know what it is."

~ Eragon and Brom, Eragon, by Christopher Paolini, perhaps one of the best known young authors

Names have power. And while they don't actually have (as far as we know) the same sort of power that they do in Paolini's book, you cannot deny that power. Human beings by nature like to be able to categorize and name things/people. It's one of the things that leads to cliques and gangs and bullies and yada yada but that's a topic for another day and another blog. It's one of the things my almost literal genius (seriously, I think he's only a handful of IQ points away from genius level- he's just too violent and passionate about teaching Spanish to go anywhere else than teaching) Spanish teacher repeats over and over and over and over and over and over and over. When you're making a study guide, number, box, and name.

The very act of naming something makes it more personal and easier to remember. To have named something is to have given it the power to become something real and tangible. I think we've all experienced that one idea floating in the back of our head that we can't really put to words. Or maybe it's just a concept or an image but it's not really defined. But as soon as you try to put it words, you either find out how amazing it truly is or you discover that you're muse is going crazy and needs to get a reality check (or maybe a fantasy check :) *pause for crickets chirping*).

Putting names to characters and stories is vitally important. And it has to be the right name. It has to capture their personality and their spirit and their actions. Maybe it's ironic. Maybe it's perfect. Maybe it wouldn't make sense to anyone other than the author and the character's best friend. It has to have flare, it can't be too boring, it can't be too out there unless everyone else's is, it has to be something that people can say/think, it should have some form of meaning, it should make sense (no Japanese names for a 19th century German) and it should be something that you like. If you don't like their name then... there's not really much of a point in naming them such.

However, I personally hate finding names with a passion.

I'm not quite sure why that is. Margaret loves it with a passion. Which is one of the reasons I always ask for her help when I need to name something, be it a character or my book.

I just get very easily frustrated with the whole task. There are thousands of names out there, and that's not even considering making up a name for your fantasy novel where everyone has names like "Yylts" or something. 

For the purpose of this blog, I am only going to address how to give a character a fairly typical name. I don't mean Sara's and John's and Bob's, but no "Yylts".

There are a couple of different ways that you can go about looking for a name. You can either search for a name based on meaning, which is what a lot of people do, or you can just try to find a name that fits. It depends on which is more important to you. Margaret usually searched based on meaning, I usually don't. Unless I want a certain meaning or irony, I'll just try to pick a name I think fits the character.

It is typically advisable to balance the two parts of the name out. Length wise (a short first name with a long last name or vice versa) and normality wise (normal first name, weird last name or vice versa). To quote my sister, "Don't name the poor character Alpharius Liechtenstien, or something." Massive mouthfuls are generally a bad idea.

Middle names are of course optional. I will beg with you though, to please, never, ever, ever, ever, ever give your character more than a reasonable amount of middle names. If you're writing an Hispanic character, it would be appropriate to give her two middle names. However, there's really almost no other reason they need more than one. Especially if they're words, not names. There is almost absolutely nothing that you can do to make anyone take a character named Madame Elizabeth Raven Blood Diamond Raquel Richardson seriously. Elizabeth Richardson isn't a bad name. You add four middle names, and all respect goes out the window.


As for names that are actual words, you want to be careful. "Hope", "Raven", "Hunter", they're not automatic no-nos, they're real names. I babysit a little boy named Hunter. Adorable little red head. You just have to be very careful with them. Especially if you're trying to use them for foreshadowing.

Something that I have done in the past, is to pick someone you know from a class or church group or soccer team or something and try out a couple of their names for characters. Maybe use their middle name as a first name, or steal their last name as long as it's not too exotic/it fits your character's background. Mix and match between people. It ensures that your name is something that is actually used in the real world. As long as you're not picking a friend with a really odd name or spelling it's not even like you're stealing their name like it's an idea or anything. It's just another source to draw names from, like a baby website.

Speaking of which, if you've ever spent enough time looking on one of them for names, most baby naming websites actually have some sort of list or page for authors trying to find names for their characters. It's pretty interesting.

My favorite website is babynamer.com

Margaret really likes http://www.20000-names.com/


But you can use any of them. Google or Bing or Yahoo or whichever website you use can lead you to a lot of different ones.

They can be really good resources and they make the task of picking names for your characters so much easier.

I still hate doing it though. I hope you enjoy it more than I do.

Wednesday, October 9, 2013

Why You Will (Probably) Never Be As Famous As JK Rowling

Let us all take this moment to realize a hard cold fact.

None of us are probably ever going to be half as famous as JK Rowling.

Or Rick Riordan, or Stephanie Meyer, or Cassandra Clare, or Susan Collins, or any other huge contemporary authors. You're probably never going to have a movie made out of your books. You're probably never going to travel around the world on book tours. You're probably never even going to make enough money to live off of. This is even if you do manage to get published.

I'm not trying to crush dreams. I'm caught up in the same dream as the rest of you. But as much as we like to retreat into our worlds of fantasy and fiction, we do have to acknowledged the reality of the fact.

I'm not saying—just to make it clear— that I will and you won't muahahaha. No, this applies to me and Margaret just as much as it does to you. It's not because we're young; it's simply an occupational hazard of writing books.

According to information published by UNESCO (United Nations Educational, Scientific and Cultural Organization), there were over 320,000 NEW book titles published in 2010 in the US alone. That's not including printing off more Harry Potters or The Adventures of Huckleberry Finns. That's new book titles. A great majority of these book titles will not do well. An even smaller percentage of those will become popular, and an even smaller percentage of that will become mainstream enough for the authors name to be recognizable. 

Here's an example that might be closer to home. Take a look around next time you go to a library or book store. Do you see how many books there are? Depending on the size of the library/book store you're at, there could be hundreds, maybe even thousands of books there. We'll forget everything that's nonfiction and wasn't originally published in the past... 20 years.

That's still a lot of books.

And of them, odds are that there are probably 20 or so that the lay man would be able to remember the author of. Those are really small odds. Becoming famous writing books is an exception, not a rule. Being able to make a good living writing books tends to be more of an exception.

Personally as in this is my opinion I would not want to be as famous as Rowling. I love her books, and I give her books credit for first making me want to write books myself. But think about how the rest of her life is going to go. She may be richer than the Queen, but she can essentially never write anything again. She tried and "it wasn't as good as Harry Potter". She will never be able to escape that shadow. The book that she wrote under a fake name was her attempt to escape it. She's obviously not entirely content to just rest on her laurels and I don't think I would be either.

I am going to take a moment to admit here though, that the title of this post is "Why You Will (Probably) Never Be As Famous As JK Rowling". Who knows? I doubt that she herself thought that she was ever going to be the authoress of books on the 10 Most Published Books of All Time list. Maybe you will become that one in 7 billion. 

The odds are though, as you can see from the 1/7 billion proportion... not exactly likely.